As you can see from the final pencil, it looks totally different from the previous version on my site! Alright, not totally different, but I did have to make some major corrections to hopefully (in my opinion) improve the way the story is told and give an engaging reading experience. This first page is vital to getting the viewer interested in the rest of the comic book. If all goes well with the rest of my work on the first page it will grip them into the storyline.
